Dudley's dungeon
Wednesday, 6 August, 2008 |
by Eboreg |
The
touches you.
Oh wow! Great stuff!
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Rating
Average rating: Good Number of ratings: 24
Comments
Wellan |
August 6, 2008 00:09
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First comment: 27 November, 2007 |
247 comments written |
I'm...not...entirely sure about this...
shudder |
Quint Sakugarne |
August 6, 2008 00:41
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First comment: 1 January, 2008 |
233 comments written |
Wellan: think about what a does to you when it touches you, and then try contracting what it does into one verb.
Rated Good. This is one of those comics that takes a moment to figure out. Not the kind I'll burst out laughing about, nor the kind I'll applaud loudly, but the kind that'll make me sit there and smile. It's somewhere between Good and Excellent (for me, but as TV Tropes likes to put it, Your Mileage May Vary). |
gneek |
August 6, 2008 00:50
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First comment: 18 January, 2008 |
159 comments written |
Stoners... |
Slowpoke |
August 6, 2008 01:12
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First comment: 27 February, 2007 |
239 comments written |
I'm sitting in my parents' basement right now, stoned out of my gourd, so I'm really getting a kick out of some of these replies. Rated 'E' for Xstacy. |
TK |
August 6, 2008 01:33
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First comment: 11 August, 2007 |
69 comments written |
I didn't get it at first, but yeah, definitely a funny comic. |
Wellan |
August 6, 2008 02:25
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First comment: 27 November, 2007 |
247 comments written |
Wow, that took me a long time. Heh. G. |
Toby Bartels |
August 6, 2008 04:47
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First comment: 11 August, 2007 |
83 comments written |
But "The touches you." isn't how it works.
How about: "You begin bashing monsters with your bare hands. You hit the ! You are freaked out."? (OK, "Oh wow! Great stuff!" is better than "You are freaked out."; I just didn't want my script to be too derivative.)
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Jackal Lantern |
August 6, 2008 05:03
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First comment: 24 June, 2008 |
24 comments written |
I think it's good. Admittedly, there's the mistake on how the turns you to stone, but "The hits! Oh wow! Great stuff" sounds too much like he's masochist to drive the actual joke home. |
Stoner Hawkes |
August 6, 2008 10:46
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First comment: 6 August, 2008 |
1 comments written |
Once it was explained I understood it and cracked a slight smile. Fair to good, fair I'll say. |
T-Jack |
August 6, 2008 12:54
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First comment: 16 March, 2008 |
52 comments written |
G for Greetings, fellow Troper. |
Mordae |
August 6, 2008 19:00
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First comment: 11 May, 2007 |
116 comments written |
I am now imagining and a bunch of footrices in a dark, smoky room in the basement of the Dungeons of Doom... |
idontexist |
August 6, 2008 19:37
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First comment: 19 July, 2008 |
35 comments written |
E but it mite change to G. I am almost 5 years sober but i still laugh at a good stoner joke. |
Antheridium |
August 6, 2008 21:16
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First comment: 17 May, 2007 |
442 comments written |
I can't think of anything intelligent to say about this.
Goobididibbily. |
Eboreg |
August 6, 2008 22:07
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First comment: 14 June, 2008 |
11 comments written |
Wow. After all of my bad jokes, I was not sure whether this one would work because of its vagueness. Now, I feel very proud of myself. |
321zero |
August 7, 2008 02:06
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First comment: 25 April, 2008 |
12 comments written |
Oh NOW I get it! Great stuff! |
Eskimo |
August 11, 2008 12:13
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First comment: 14 April, 2004 |
166 comments written |
Oh, stoned. Not used to that... I simply read it as stiffen, i.e. a Viagra ad. |
MadDawg2552 |
October 10, 2008 18:43
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First comment: 6 October, 2008 |
69 comments written |
The touches you "down there" and you feel it move. |
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