Dudley's dungeon
Friday, 28 September, 2007 |
by SQLGuru |
You fall asleep.
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@ "Stupid gas traps!"
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###-............hhhh
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The named
Frodo's named
glows blue.
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h (Frodo) "Oh no!" h (Sam) "Run!"
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The named
Frodo drops a shiny
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h (Frodo) "!!!"
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The named
Frodo picks up a
shiny .
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hhh-.h..........-###
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You wake up. You
trigger a gas trap.
You fall asleep.
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@ "Another one?"
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###-........WW..-WW#
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#WWWW..W..W...W.-###
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You wake up.
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@ "The dungeon is boring sometimes."
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Rating
Average rating: Good Number of ratings: 18
Comments
Am Shaedan |
September 28, 2007 00:42
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First comment: 18 May, 2004 |
49 comments written |
It got much better when I reread it. Solid work. |
Kernigh |
September 28, 2007 04:26
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First comment: 6 April, 2005 |
349 comments written |
Sometimes your dream takes place in the room that you fell asleep in...
http://www.nicolaas.net/dudley/index.php?f=20050418 |
Dav |
September 28, 2007 04:30
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First comment: 26 June, 2004 |
147 comments written |
I don't think LotR jokes work in nethack, considering those nethack elements drawn from LotR in the first place... |
Am Shaedan |
September 28, 2007 12:11
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First comment: 18 May, 2004 |
49 comments written |
You are missing the point of the joke Dav. There could have been aliens running around and the joke would still be the same. |
jukka |
September 28, 2007 12:11
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First comment: 22 November, 2006 |
57 comments written |
Dav, I think these particular events being LotR -related was irrelevant. It was just about SOMETHING happening when the sleeps.. |
SQLGuru |
September 28, 2007 23:56
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First comment: 23 October, 2006 |
77 comments written |
Jukka is correct in my intent. The LotR references easy.....the references to dropping the was sort of a side joke.....I posted that I had the idea a week+ ago and already aluded to the fact that it was probably only worth an F or G.....but I thought it was acceptable filler.
Layne
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Grognor |
September 29, 2007 03:12
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First comment: 4 April, 2007 |
1161 comments written |
I don't like the mistakes in the comic. The proper text for activating a sleeping gas trap is "A of gas puts you to sleep!". Furthermore, the game wouldn't refer to a called Frodo as "The named Frodo", it would just refer to it as "Frodo". Only bumps it down from excellent to good though. |
Fathead |
September 30, 2007 03:36
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First comment: 1 April, 2006 |
1136 comments written |
Not too bad, but I partly disagree with Grognor's comment. As long as it's proper grammar, and we can understand it, who cares! Thus, I agree with the second comment, but not the first. |
Slowpoke |
October 1, 2007 22:24
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First comment: 27 February, 2007 |
239 comments written |
I have to second Grognor's POV. Part of the enjoyment of any parody is the precision in the underlying elements, from which the takeoff then adds the humor. |
Medardo |
May 2, 2008 17:25
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First comment: 5 December, 2007 |
23 comments written |
That was a laugh! but proper text is proper text... mmm proper text, im gonna have this word in my mind all the day. What an instructive game! |
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